This is one of the few golf shots that managed to include any action at all. Instead of a square format I think I would prefer a landscape format so you have somewhere in photo for the ball to go.
I don' t really care for the angle at which you caught the tee floating in the air. I would've taken this pic a millisecond sooner so the tee was more vertical...and you should have placed a softbox where the tee is to illuminate his face better. From my experience, people don't appreciate the timing of these shots. Perhaps a title that let's the non-golfer know that the ball is travelling about 160-170mph at this point would help them?? Curious to see how this shot fares.