This just seems too staged. Maybe if the pieces of paper weren't in such perfect symmetry, it might be a bit more interesting. Or perhaps if it were shot from a side view and not just straight on. The rose is a tad blurred. Hope this is helpful.
I like the idea, but technically...... The baby's certificates aren't even filled in - they're blank! Sorry, but overall this image just doesn't grab me. The rose seems out of place and the cedar bg is distracting.
Very nice take on the challenge. Also portrays a feeling of morality...marriage and family together. Two things bother me, though. The blanks are not filled in on the footprint pages. I don't have to know the information and you'd probably not want to put that on the internet, but it's just something missing. Also, while I like the cedar background, it just seems too dark or off color to me. Did you happen to increase the saturation on the reds? The flower looks over saturated to me, so if you did, it affected the cedar background. Would have been better to leave it.
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