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05/09/2003 12:03:08 AM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Good find and a good photograph!
CHALLENGE: Meets che challenge.
COMPOSITION: Composition is very good, I like how you placed the bicycle at the left side and included a long view of the sidewalk. It suggests the idea that there's somewhere interesting beyond to ride the bicycle. The shot does seem to be leaning slightly right though (it needs a slight counterclockwise rotation to be level I think)
TECHNICAL: All technical aspects are excellent. Black and white was a good choice to add an old-time feel and bring out the light and shadow.
CONCLUSION: A good, solid entry to this challenge.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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05/06/2003 09:58:07 AM |
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05/05/2003 10:15:16 PM |
| great use of black and white, good contrast, maybe a little heavy on the highlight. |
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05/05/2003 01:49:56 PM |
| this is a nice image, i like the contrast and the depth, nice job 5 |
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05/05/2003 03:20:57 AM |
| The decision to go black and white gives this image an old fashioned feel to it. It's a humorous pic as well and one I would also expect to find on a postcard. |
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05/04/2003 01:51:47 AM |
| not to be confused with "rental bikes" ;) I like the starkness of the sign, and not sure if you intended it, but i also really like hte view down the sidewalk, has a very urban pedestrian feel. |
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05/02/2003 12:03:23 PM |
| Black and white works well here. I wouldn`t have seen a this shot, well done.8 |
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04/30/2003 07:35:13 PM |
| great composition - love the line of the sidewalk - suggesting you rent a bike and go that way! |
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04/30/2003 11:46:46 AM |
| Nice tones, lighting, dof, good composition. |
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04/30/2003 10:16:53 AM |
| makes me smile :) beautiful capture and great contrast ! |
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04/30/2003 01:45:43 AM |
| I like the choice of b/w for this shot. I like negative space and lines, but I think in this case, the sidewalk probably leads the viewer's eye out of the shot instead of into it. The sign is a good find. |
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04/30/2003 12:32:38 AM |
| in a challenge full of snapshots and people's cars, this is very refreshing...nice job, good luck |
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