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"Sprung From The Pen...."
tfarrell23


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Challenge: Circle (Basic Editing III)
Collection: 2005
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5400
Location: Home
Date: Jul 5, 2005
Galleries: Humorous, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jul 5, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 142 out of 545
Avg (all users): 5.3175
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 5.1801
Avg (non-participants): 5.5133
Views since voting: 730
Views during voting: 360
Votes: 274
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0


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07/12/2005 11:28:17 PM
Original idea. I like this composition. The lighting seems just a tad too much. Still an awesome shot.
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07/12/2005 06:30:35 PM
I'm not a pro.... i'm ongly 15 years old but i think it should not be so blured
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07/12/2005 03:34:02 PM
Great use of light and clarity. Wonderful shot, I hope you're doing well in the challenge!
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07/08/2005 11:15:46 PM
lose the border
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07/08/2005 08:51:07 PM
Very simple and effective. Great use of rule of thirds, angle and DOF. A good lesson on how something simple can be made into a really good photo.
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07/08/2005 05:03:32 PM
I really enjoy macros of unexpected, everyday objects. Shallow DOF really works for me. If you were to make it better, I'd say use a clean white background. It also seems kind of grainy.
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07/06/2005 05:03:26 PM
While a great shot in the technical sense, the depth of field and everything is awesome, in my opinion, this shot seems a little bland and boring, lacking in creativity, interest, and beauty.
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07/06/2005 03:50:42 PM
Neat shot, neat idea. I think this would have been a stronger image if I was looking a little bit more through the item... a little lower PoV. I like the shallow DOF used and good clean backdrop. - 7 - JeB
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07/06/2005 02:51:06 AM
Simple - elegant at the same time. I like the industrial feel to it. Good use of light.
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07/06/2005 12:54:24 AM
i like the graininess of the picture and the background blurr on the rest of the spring! but maybe place the camera lower so that the spring looks like a tunnel? that could be interesting
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07/06/2005 12:09:55 AM
I think this photograph suffers somewhat from composition. The human eye tends to focus more just above the center of a photo, and since the spring is situated mostly toward the bottom right, my eye tends to focus on the upper blurry part of the spring rather than the crisp lower area. I do like the picture, please don't misunderstand. 7
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