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			|  | 07/14/2005 12:00:54 AM | 
		| | *Critique Club* 
 YUMMY!! Man, I want some ice cream now!! I love what you chose to take a picture of. My few suggestions would have been to have more light and tone down the hot spot. I think that it needs to be present because you can see that it is smooth and shiny. I love the background, however, I wish there was more detail in the ice cream and hot fudge. Overall-I think that this is a nice shot. And the reason I feel that it is not GREAT for this challenge is because a cherry has no texture to it. It looks the same real close up as it does from a normal distance. There is nothing revealed by the camera that you can't see for yourself. I think what makes a GREAT macro is when the camera has zoomed in sooo much that textures and colors are noticed only by your image and not right away by your eye. I hope this was helpful, I'm trying to get better at this. Good luck to you and God Bless.
 
 Mandy
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			|  | 07/10/2005 11:51:38 PM | 
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			|  | 07/10/2005 04:09:33 PM | 
		| | Yummy, perfect composition, but this needs to be bit lighter | 
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			|  | 07/09/2005 10:03:37 PM | 
		| | MMm i'm hungry now.  Good shot, just a tad dark. | 
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			|  | 07/08/2005 08:26:14 AM | 
		| | Good idea. I think I would have liked it better with a more colorful backround. | 
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			|  | 07/07/2005 11:00:52 PM | 
		| | I like the subject (yum!) and I think the composition is very nice. The black background along with the dark red cherry makes the picture too dark IMO. Nice work. | 
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			|  | 07/07/2005 10:42:22 PM | 
		| | seems a bit too dark but sure looks yummy 7 | 
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			|  | 07/07/2005 09:42:20 PM | 
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			|  | 07/05/2005 10:34:25 AM | 
		| | I like how the chocolate blends into the background.  Makes you think there is a sea of hot fudge behind it all! | 
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			|  | 07/04/2005 11:44:34 AM | 
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			|  | 07/04/2005 11:33:43 AM | 
		| | Base: 5 Tech: +2
 Subj:+2
 Chln:
 
 Total: 9
 
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			|  | 07/04/2005 11:03:21 AM | 
		| | It's nice to see something besides a flower or a bug.   I like the composition of ths a lot with the black background and the vibrant red.  Good luck. | 
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			|  | 07/04/2005 06:05:39 AM | 
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			|  | 07/04/2005 03:26:56 AM | 
		| | Creative and excellent composition. I would have liked to see the light on the stem to be a bit more consistent. | 
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			|  | 07/04/2005 12:52:18 AM | 
		| | the spot of light on the cherry needs to be cloned out | 
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