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Nice alliterative title. I like how the cobwebs mirror the lines of the veins in the currents. I would like to see a clearer composition. The currents fall out of the frame on 3 sides with no clear reason for cropping them there. Perhaps framing the three berries most in focus (by rule of three?) and using a smaller depth of focus to sift the other berries away from out attention you'd get a more concentrated composition? |