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05/13/2003 12:26:08 AM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Quite unnatural color.
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.
COMPOSITION: Composition is reasonably good, though it might have been stronger if you included less of the foreground.
TECHNICAL: The most striking technical issue in this photograph is the unnatural color. It appears the white balance may have been set incorrectly. If it is set to a manual setting, perhaps returning to automatic would have helped; if it is in automatic then perhaps setting a custom white-balance would have strengthened the image. Depth of field, exposure, etc. all appear appropriate for the shot.
CONCLUSION: A good entry. More attention to the color probably would have been the single most effective way to increase your score.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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05/04/2003 02:46:15 PM |
| I gotta get some of that blue grass i`m a bit tired of my green stuff. |
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05/04/2003 09:18:01 AM |
| Why the unnatural coloring? Doesn't really contribute anything to the picture. |
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05/03/2003 08:58:36 PM |
| Nice subject, but the colors make me want to go wash my eyes. |
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05/03/2003 01:38:28 AM |
| whoa! the colours are really really strange on this one. Subject is nice, but the post processing is not doing it justice at all. The grass is an unnatural colour, as is the sky and the load on the wagon. |
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05/02/2003 12:30:17 AM |
| Ack you ruined the colors. Too much blue/magenta. |
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05/01/2003 01:59:28 PM |
| The colors seem a bit out of place |
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05/01/2003 02:27:39 AM |
| I think the color swap is harsh... composition needs improvement.. or perhaps a better crop |
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04/30/2003 02:48:14 PM |
| Strange color choice... - 5 |
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04/30/2003 12:42:43 PM |
| I"m not sure I like the head-on view of this old time carriage, but would have preferred a more oblique angle of view and more of a close up to provide additional detail of the plants in the carriage. Also, I find the blue cast objectionable. |
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04/30/2003 10:30:05 AM |
| interesting idea, but what a funny looking grass... |
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04/30/2003 01:34:27 AM |
| a little too heavy on the blue on this one, or the saturation's too high, or something... I think this photo would work just fine completely desaturated. |
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04/30/2003 12:25:45 AM |
| did you mess with the colours? looks weird |
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