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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Circle (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5000 Z
Location: Phoenix, Arizona
Date: Jun 29, 2005
Aperture: f/8
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/1600
Galleries: Sky, Nature
Date Uploaded: Jun 30, 2005

Phoenix sunset through smoke from local wildfires

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Place: 520 out of 545
Avg (all users): 3.7754
Avg (commenters): 3.5000
Avg (participants): 3.7362
Avg (non-participants): 3.8319
Views since voting: 637
Views during voting: 385
Votes: 276
Comments: 6
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07/11/2005 10:17:29 AM
subject in the middle annoys.
07/07/2005 11:45:31 PM
A bit fuzzy, IMHO. I like the sun shining thru the smoke, but I think there needs to be some sort of "anchor" in the foreground to give the photo perspective. Maybe more of the tree with the sun in the upper left corner (keeping rule of thirds in mind)???
07/06/2005 05:40:58 PM
Is the sun supposed to be your circle?
07/06/2005 01:20:53 PM
centred image is poor composition. picture too small. needs more contrast in sky.
07/06/2005 02:29:50 AM
Smoke indeed. But not that interesting. With so little context (trees on the bottom right) I'm left to wonder why the smoke is there and what dramatic event might be occurring to cause the smoke. I think a super wide angle lens with something relevant (like the fire causing the smoke :P ) in the foreground would have improved this shot.
07/06/2005 12:12:43 AM
im sure you'll get a lot of comments on this: the bullseye composition is not very good sometimes. and the tree maybe throws it a little off balance. maybe if you included more of the tree to make it more obvious that that is also a contributing element to the pic


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