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Where Metal meets Metal
Where Metal meets Metal
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Challenge: Transportation (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus C-4000Z
Location: Minneapolis, MN
Date: Apr 27, 2003
Aperture: F2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 0.004
Date Uploaded: Apr 27, 2003

 A section of a railcar wheel.

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Place: 103 out of 246
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 05/11/2003 09:03:04 AM
*Critique Club*

FIRST IMPRESSION: Good abstract, lighting makes this shot difficult.

CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.

COMPOSITION: Composition within the flarme is good; however, I personally feel that the choice of a wheel that is right at a switching point (and thus the inclusion of the wheel guards and the track for the other direction) adds conflicting lines to the shot.

TECHNICAL: Exposure on the wheel is excellent, ground and track however are a bit washed out. Shooting shooting in different light may improve this a bit. Also, as there is very little color in this image I wonder if you tried converting to black and white. This would help emphasize form over color, which could benefit your shot.

CONCLUSION: A good idea but I feel the execution is not quite there. If you have an opportunity, spending some time reshooting this may be a worthwhile learning experience.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/06/2003 01:50:06 PM
this is a nice close up, i like how sharp this image is, nice job 4
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 04/30/2003 02:26:28 PM
gritty, great detail
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 04/30/2003 10:40:34 AM
Great idea, it just looks a bit fried (over exposed).
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 04/30/2003 02:55:06 AM
I like your title. Not sure what I'm looking at here, (an old train wheel on tracks I think) I like your detail but the shadow makes things hard to decipher.
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