I see what you are trying to do here, but it's lacking interest. If you had a dramatic sky or some kinda design on the tower this would work, but as is it doesn't have any staying power or pop.
TC
the bright foreground does not reall compliment your line. Look at the other pics, same idea, submitted in this challenge. still, not bad at all and should look good in any portfolio.
Focus a little soft on my LCD. Picture rather static - not much happening or much to look at. I don't see leading lines as a strong compositional technique but this is a good use of shape.