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06/28/2005 04:55:14 AM |
| I think this could be a artistic, creative image, but there are several problems. First, the cutting off of the meter is in an awkward place. Including all or none of it would have been better. Also, there are bits of random objects in the scene, but don't feel like an important part of the composition. The texture of the wall is interesting, however, and you could get closer to it to see more detail in the wall. |
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06/26/2005 04:20:05 AM |
| Not really a very inspiring composition I'm afraid, nor is the clarity quite there. Perhaps a perspective view looking up the pipe to the meter might have worked better? |
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06/25/2005 10:31:14 PM |
well, nice idea but..
color good, lines good, lighting flat, confusing even for still life, out of balance, spots on wall distracting, not much thought put into it, overall very boring |
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06/24/2005 11:08:04 PM |
| I don't think metal it's the principal element in the photo. The composition it's good. |
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06/23/2005 11:26:12 AM |
| I guess I just didn't get what you were trying to do here. Odd subject. |
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06/23/2005 01:28:23 AM |
| Hmmm, closer shot might have been more appropriate. Too cluttered. |
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06/22/2005 04:03:17 PM |
| I would like to see a different composition for this still life. It feels cut off to me. Perhaps either a tighter shot? I like the flower on the pole. |
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06/22/2005 02:52:48 PM |
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06/22/2005 12:17:20 PM |
| Doesnt scream "metal" to me like I think a challenge should. Nice though. |
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06/22/2005 10:57:31 AM |
| Based on your title I would have liked the shot much better if the meter was actually in the shot. |
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06/22/2005 07:58:59 AM |
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