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06/23/2005 08:47:22 AM |
| Seems to have a lot of noise, missing bridge details. Good angle and color and definately fits the challenge. 7 |
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06/22/2005 09:35:47 AM |
| Okay- well this fits the challenge to be sure. Metal in both the car and the bridge. The problem is the composition doesn't really do much more then that. The large mass of the bridge ends up cutting the image in half. The upper bridge work is so cluttered looking that it's challenging to find a point for the eyes to rest. In this case, I think getting closer to some of the bridge work might help improve the story here. When I look at an image, there's always a story there. Even in abstracts. The challenge as a photographer is to try and tell that story in a compelling way. What is it that you want me to see here- other than a bridge? Is it the speed of the car? Is it the might of the bridge span? Find that element, focus on it, and you have a stronger composition. Hope this helps some! |
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06/22/2005 09:16:10 AM |
| Not technically a great shot, but funny. :) |
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