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05/04/2003 11:02:16 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Appropriate time of year for this pic. I think if you did this one around Aug. people would think you're nuts. In April, its very good. I think there is just a little too much going on in this pic. I think you're fine with the rabbit and the eggs, but I really don't like it on the grass and the lighting is really flat. I think to add a little more emotive touch this would be a good studio shot with soft lighting and the basic black background. The grass I feel just makes it too busy.
Technical - This is really sharp and well taken. I just don't think the exposure yields the kind of image that it could in less of a natural setting. There is nothing "wrong" at all with this pic, but I think it could be done better.
Overall - Great idea, and well taken, but I think you didn't maximize the potential of this subject by putting it in natural light due to the flatness of the pic. I think there are more fruitful ways to go about this pic to make it more emotive. This is a pic I wanted to do well, but just didn't have that little extra it needed to catch the viewers attention. Good luck in future challenges - Bob |
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04/28/2003 12:05:05 AM |
| Because the grass is such a strong beautiful green, I would almost like this picture better without the eggs...but it's just my opinion :) Still, it's a well done photo |
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04/26/2003 06:50:14 PM |
| very clear and focused picture! :) |
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04/24/2003 01:43:04 AM |
| This is sweet! You had a good idea and have implemented it very well. Very focused. |
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04/23/2003 12:34:50 PM |
| Cute shot, nice composition. A little catchlight in the bunny's eye would make this a professional, greeting card-type shot. Very nice. 9 |
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04/23/2003 10:21:57 AM |
| In the clover too. great idea. |
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04/23/2003 12:28:04 AM |
| oh this is cute ! The color is so rich. The crop and DOF are great ! |
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