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04/24/2003 11:07:29 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
I concur with all of the compliments below!
In this image, I see Mt Rainier, a rare enough occurance! It is centered, which gives the photo and mountain a solid, anchored look. The large dark portion adds to this feel in a (wisely) needed way, because the mountain, disappearing into the clouds, tends to look higher and in need of anchoring. The rule of thirds would have, in my opinion taken from this, when it is what is needed for the strong mountain look. This is an extremely difficult shot, because you have different whites on white and different grays on gray and black. You have a few other very subtle hues mixed in just to make it interesting!
Below, folks said that the image was too dark, but to me an image is too dark only when it should be lighter. In this case, I think the darkness adds to the drama of the mountain and clouds. What's missing for me here are strong contrasts. It is a very subtle image with grays on grays on lighter grays. It would be nice, perhaps if more whites were present, which would increase the drama without lightening it too much. The clouds you've captured here are quite marvelous, and I love how they float in three distinct levels, giving the image depth and interest. In this photo the focus is the clouds, which also get focus in your title. In fact, the mountain seems appropriately hazy and a bit blurry compared to those sharp clouds. I suppose some may be perplexed that there is a mountain here, but the clouds are stealing the show! Mountains do have the corner on being majestic, and focus on the mountain is probably anticipated, but I'm glad you made the choice to show us that clouds can hold their own, too, even if your exploration did not pull an exciting score. Again, perhapas more contrast in the clouds may have increased their importance in the shot.
In sum, this is a solid shot. You've managed to give clouds the focus and provide some drama through lighting and good composition. Many of the elements that really work well in your photo are not evident with a mere cursory look, which is what most folks give images here these days, but I want to congratulate you on crafting an image that is both interesting and engaging.
Best of luck to you in the future!
David |
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04/20/2003 04:31:07 PM |
| Nice image, a little dark for me. But I don't know what (if any) adjustments you've already made/considered... |
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04/19/2003 07:49:48 AM |
| A little more exposure and I think this one is a contender. Great capture nonetheless. |
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04/18/2003 11:34:42 AM |
| Nice shot but the details seem washed out. Maybe changing the white balance would bring out the snow of the mountain and make the clouds a little more dramatic. |
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04/18/2003 11:26:58 AM |
| This is too dark but I am sure it was all you had to work with. Rainier is so fickle, she only shows herself to the very patient. |
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04/17/2003 02:06:22 PM |
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04/17/2003 03:58:37 AM |
| Wow wild weather!!! I like the layering you have composed, although I would prefer to have seen less darkness at the bottom and more sky at the top. |
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04/16/2003 06:06:12 AM |
| Too dark. I would like to see the rule of thirsd used more in this photo. |
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04/16/2003 01:04:48 AM |
| Interesting clouds. I wanna like this, but the lighting is just too weird. |
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04/15/2003 09:11:36 PM |
| nice sharp image, good work |
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04/15/2003 05:17:01 PM |
| This could benefit from brightness adjusments. However, it does capture the mood of an over cast day. |
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04/15/2003 04:10:54 PM |
| I like the "old" feel I get from this picture, but it seems nonetheless a tad overprocessed? Perhaps I'm wrong, I still enjoy the shot. |
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04/15/2003 02:26:18 AM |
| I visit this area often, I like the shot. I know that time was short for the challenge, but I've often seen a similar set-up with near blinding brilliant white off of the top of those clouds, set against the snow to make an incredible contrast of black/white. Maybe you could sneak one of those into another challenge. =) |
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04/14/2003 11:23:17 PM |
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04/14/2003 10:29:04 PM |
| I personaly think the colours are a little off in this picture. But meets the weather aspect of the challenge and the shape and shadows of the clouds are great. |
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04/14/2003 02:16:08 PM |
| I like the texture of this photo. |
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04/14/2003 01:44:53 PM |
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04/14/2003 05:15:25 AM |
| Way way to dark. Good pic otherwise. |
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04/14/2003 12:52:24 AM |
| Love this subject! Nice composition with Ranier centered. The colors seem dull and on the magenta/pusplish side. I would like to see the crisp white of the snow. |
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