It's not clear to me exactly what's been damaged by the snow...looks as if it's the roof, but can't tell for sure. Would have prefered more of a close up of one of the buildings than the whole row of them. Also, pic appears a bit underexposed.
Although this clearly shows the effects of weather, I think you are going to have a hard time with this shot. It is a little dark. Increasing the brightness might have helped a little, but probably would have made it look washed out.
Did you consider cropping out the fore ground? I think it would have brought more attention to the damaged building. . . and added emphasis to its lenght.