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05/24/2005 12:50:14 PM |
*Critique Club*
This is a nice idea for this challenge. I think it fits the challenge of triangles well.
The lighting does not work in my opinion though. I think that the round shadows in the lower right distract from the triangle shapes we are suposed to be concentrating on. The lighting is just way too harsh/dark to work effectively here.
I do however, like the triangle shape shadows in the upper right and lower left corners of the shot. I think that works. If you could somehow keep those shadows while eliminating the others, I think that could be cool.
Colors are good, just maybe a bit dark.
Focus seems ok on the seams, but the edges of the balls seem a bit soft to me. This might be a lighting thing too.
Overall, I like the idea and the set up is nice, but suffers greatly from lighting.
~Heather~ |
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05/17/2005 10:01:28 AM |
| IMO triangles too close to edge and shadow is distracting. try placing light more on top of these and try not to crop so close. just my opinion. hope i helped :o) |
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05/17/2005 09:22:40 AM |
| I think the shadows on the right are too strong. I think you still could have gottent he 3d effect and left some detail in the shadow. |
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05/16/2005 06:22:24 PM |
| this would have been better with another light source, the shadows are a bit strong as it is |
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05/16/2005 12:48:57 PM |
| Beautiful primary colors. Your pyramid arrangement multiplies the theme many times over. |
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05/16/2005 09:17:37 AM |
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05/11/2005 04:33:06 AM |
| Good idea, but I think the lighting let you down a bit. Good luck for the challenge. |
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05/11/2005 01:07:57 AM |
| Excellent capture! a little less noise in the shadows, or more defined shadows would be stunning. 9. |
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