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05/17/2005 08:28:32 PM |
| Fourth billiard-ball shot I've seen, and my second favourite. My favourite was the one which wasn't symmetrically placed, though I appreciate your low angle. |
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05/17/2005 02:00:52 PM |
| focus seems to hit right before the balls. |
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05/17/2005 09:50:41 AM |
| Nice more sharpness would be better |
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05/16/2005 09:51:50 PM |
| if the color was a little sharper id like it more, good shot though. |
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05/16/2005 12:18:20 AM |
| Ok. First of all your shit is not in focus you need to get the basics right first im not sure if you tried something fance with depth of field or what but just get it right in future. The composition is quite cool but mind you dont leave to much negative space unless you are trying to show something with it. Lastly your colour balance is way out, it looks like you have three black balls across the front there this is probably due to poor light. An idea would be to take the shot in lighter conditions and darken it in photoshop this would help focus and colour. This gets an "NB" for not bad but surley you can tell if its in focus or not try taking a few hundred shots and selecting from them then you can grab a focused and colourful one for next week. |
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05/15/2005 07:39:21 PM |
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05/14/2005 06:04:10 AM |
| nice idea and angle, but the image is out of focus |
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05/14/2005 12:55:36 AM |
| Aaarrgghh! This is the same thing I entered. Yours is better than mine, though. Good luck! |
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05/12/2005 01:13:19 PM |
this is a great idea, and I love the wide angle. Here's why it's not working for me. The green felt is yellow - there's a neat trick with hue/saturation that would pull that right out, or selective color. I wish the depth of field was wider, but I would forgive that if the top wasn't so crowded. I feel like if you lifted and tilted the camera you DOF would work itself out, and you could frame it better. The focus over all looks soft to me too.
Maybe crop it into a square, but that's a nit pick.
There you have it, my longest comment ever. For some reason I thought you might like to know - so you're the lucky one. :) 5 |
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05/12/2005 12:03:41 PM |
Those are popular in this challenge...
It fits the challenge nicely but I have 2 improvement suggestions:
1. your white balance is not set properly. There's a yellowish tone to the photo.
2. I like the shallow DOF but I think the bal in the best focus should have been the first one closer to me, not the two after it.
Good luck on the challenge.
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05/12/2005 08:56:36 AM |
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05/11/2005 12:28:25 PM |
| Think I would have focused closer to the front, on the 1 ball..... nice shot! |
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05/11/2005 11:10:45 AM |
Seen a few of these, this is the best one so far :) G'luck for the challenge
Alex |
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05/11/2005 10:37:26 AM |
| there is just somthing about this picture that bothers me... light/focus |
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05/11/2005 09:34:49 AM |
| This is a nice iamge. I really like the angle from which you shot this image as well as the shadow. Nice work. |
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05/11/2005 08:28:28 AM |
| needs more DOF....to soft |
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05/11/2005 05:49:25 AM |
| cool angle, but the blur isnt for me |
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05/11/2005 01:27:17 AM |
| The white balance seems a bit off, but i like the idea. |
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