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05/09/2005 10:23:15 AM |
great image
i like the theme to this picture |
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05/08/2005 12:33:02 PM |
| I really like your creativity with this. It's a pleasant change from the typical city scapes. I wish I could see the flame on the candle a little better, though. (8) |
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05/08/2005 10:41:02 AM |
| out of focus. pity, because it was a nice idea. |
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05/08/2005 06:11:48 AM |
| You have a focus problem here. Let your camera focus as long as your subject is well lit, with a flashlight for example, then switch your light source off and shoot. Some more text in the diary would have been nice. Showing a person writing in the diary would have been even better. 4. |
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05/07/2005 02:11:24 AM |
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05/06/2005 06:10:48 PM |
| Nice photo. This challenge however is to take a photo outside, late at night. |
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05/06/2005 10:13:29 AM |
| great idea for a late night photo !! |
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05/05/2005 11:35:10 PM |
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05/05/2005 09:01:00 AM |
| image is out of focus and does not meet the requirement of being taken outside. |
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05/04/2005 12:48:56 PM |
| Ooooooops. It was supposed to be outside. I'm so sorry! I bet you have heard tht a lot. It's a cool photo tho. Really conveys a mood. |
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05/04/2005 11:46:40 AM |
| Not a bad interpretation of the theme, but it would have been better if the picture were in focus. |
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05/04/2005 10:21:34 AM |
| This was a good idea for the challenge, your composition is good, your light is good. Your focus is just too weak. |
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05/04/2005 10:16:05 AM |
| shot is blurry. tripod would have helped immensely. |
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05/04/2005 02:02:25 AM |
| Conceptually, this is an interesting shot. I like the idea of late night writing. Unfortunately, it doesn't convey any sense of possibly being outside (on cloth, it implies being found in a bedroom, the way that it is), which violates the challenge constraints. Also, focus is very soft (intentional? it works ont he pen, but not on the paper), and the blown highlights on the candle combine with the lens flare to really hurt the image. Colors are also a little off, seeming a bit too reddish to me. If this were advanced editing, I would have recommended blending multiple shots to get both the candle and the book. With basic, the most I can recommend is underexposing this, and then dumping contrast and boosting shadows to see if you could get the book back up. Correcting the flare probably requires buying a better lens. If you could have found a tree stump or porch chair to set this on, that might have helped with the "outside" aspect. |
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05/04/2005 01:14:22 AM |
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05/04/2005 12:52:08 AM |
| Doesn't really FEEL like an outside shot, to me... In any event focus is too weak to do the image justice. |
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