That may be peaceful, but it certainly doesn't look like it. The lotus position would have looked more serene. The light isn't particularly good; I find the strong shadows on the wall behind your model distracting.
This light is too harsh. The photos levels are not good. Hence it is hard to see distinction in the subtle shadows like in her pants. The contrast is weak and overall has a very unprofessional feel to it.
I'm sure it is peaceful for her, but if I was doing that I would be in great pain I am sure. Good concept, but the angle is a little static, maybe experiment with same theme and different angles and lighting. Maybe black and white. Good luck.
Too many clashing colors here, and the model is too close to the wall, the shadows being far too strong. You needed one or two more light sources for this to be effective, and a different POV... the way it's set up right now looks hurried and snap-shottish.
Flash looks awful here, especially the shadows. Composition is unbalanced, and picture looks wonky because photo was not taken straight on. Carpet not a good background element. Nothing is sharp.
The lightning is not very good for my opinoin which makes colors and shadows uninteresing. With such a beautiful model you should be able to make much more interesting image.
Nice idea, but I feel the lighting could be better, as well as the color tones. The clothing color fights against the carpet, wall and the white line along the bottom of the floor. The light bounce detracts from the peacefulness. 5
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