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04/13/2003 12:36:05 PM |
| The slightly off-centre composition just makes it look as though you wanted to avoid centring the lemon. I prefer composition to have an artistic reason behind it. The colours seem washed out. |
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04/12/2003 11:54:17 PM |
| It looks like the white balance is off a bit. I think a white background and a little more saturation of the color would make this shot really pop. |
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04/12/2003 03:26:27 AM |
| After all these pies, this looks like a real treat! A clever punny image. It is probably just a tad out of focus and a little washed. |
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04/11/2003 01:04:23 PM |
| I'm not sure that the background choice was the best here. Also, I think this could use some sharpening. I like the framing of this. |
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04/10/2003 03:11:55 PM |
| I would like to have seen this rotated more so the inside of the fruit was showing. The glare on the side of the grapefruit is a bit distracting and I think rotating the view would help that. I am not sure that the piece on the bottom serves much purpose here - I think I would try it without that added. |
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04/09/2003 11:25:44 PM |
| I am going to say that the lighting is a bit bright. It is washing a little of the detail out of the skin and the flesh of the grapefruit. I would have centered it in the frame/crop, since it is a lone subject |
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04/09/2003 10:47:10 AM |
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04/09/2003 01:10:28 AM |
| Picture seems a bit bland. Colors could be more vivid. Otherwise a good take on the challenge. |
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04/08/2003 08:15:52 PM |
| OK, the interpretation works for me. The lighting and focus are good. Not crazy about the composition, and general impact is moderate for me. |
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04/07/2003 07:33:02 PM |
| Really nice colors, good lighting, good choice of background too. focus seems right on. . . |
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04/07/2003 12:23:47 AM |
| Good idea. Wish the angle was more shooting into the guts of the grapefruit, rather than the skin. |
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04/07/2003 12:16:37 AM |
| could use some contrast adjustments... but good idea |
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