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Silver Greek Key Design Bracelet...$129.95
Silver Greek Key Design Bracelet...$129.95
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Challenge: Jewelry Advertisement (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Nikon D70
Location: Home
Date: Apr 20, 2005
Aperture: 8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Still Life, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Apr 21, 2005

 Monastiraki is a touristy if not unique area in Athens which houses many jewelry stores that would sell jewelry just like this. I have never attempted anything like this, so hopefully I am on the the right track. My DOF and jewelry store like plush background I think helped a lot. Thanks for your votes and views.

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Statistics
Place: 63 out of 159
Avg (all users): 5.5967
Avg (commenters): 5.5789
Avg (participants): 5.3500
Avg (non-participants): 5.7692
Views since voting: 1132
Views during voting: 366
Votes: 243
Comments: 23
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/01/2005 02:37:14 PM
The right hand side, where the links are larger, carries the impact, so those links should be in focus.
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 04/30/2005 08:25:09 PM
Seems to lack depth, half of it is out of focus
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 04/30/2005 01:25:29 PM
bad perspective on the bracelet, but the layout of the ad is good
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 04/29/2005 11:37:15 PM
That's funny! Interesting texture too.
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 04/29/2005 03:56:12 PM
This appears to be shot at quite an angle. the foreground, (assumed right side) is noticeably blurred. Think it would have been better at less of an angle to keep focus sharp.
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 04/29/2005 03:26:01 AM
I like the light background behind the text, but I which the whole necklace were in focus
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 04/29/2005 01:53:53 AM
I think the angle of the braclet is a bit off causing it to be out of focus on the right. Besides that, I like silver jewellery.
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 04/28/2005 10:25:33 PM
I like it, the only thing I'd change is having the clasp in focus...I know that's almost impossible, but that would bring it from a 7 to a 9.
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 04/28/2005 06:42:27 PM
Simple and pretty. I like the curve in the jewelry, it makes for a good composition.
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 04/28/2005 05:29:57 PM
....or good enough for the British Museum! Good approach although I might have been tempted to bring the focus a little closer to include the right hand end of the chain.
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 04/28/2005 04:15:57 PM
i love the perspective on this shot...the color of the backround is soft and provides a nice contrast...good luck
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 04/28/2005 10:23:51 AM
The words seem more important than the bracelet. The bracelet would work much better if it was all in focus, the depth of field is way too low in this picture.
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 04/27/2005 09:22:34 PM
Nice. RIght side of the photo is a bit soft in focus.
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 04/27/2005 09:16:52 PM
Very nicely done! Good composition and lighting. Appealing presentation.
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 04/27/2005 11:55:16 AM
Very nice composition. Excellent colors and textures. i wish the DOF was not so narrow, but that's just my personal taste. nice selection of jewel. font seems to work here, which cannot be said about most of the entries inthis challenge. On of my top 10. Cheers!
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 04/27/2005 09:50:33 AM
Interesting choice of verbiage. Nice background choice for this piece of jewelry. Good composition with positioning of the necklace and text. Not sure about the choice of text for the jewelers name...hard to read. Good luck in the challenge.
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 04/27/2005 08:59:24 AM
kinda wish the whole thing was in focus ... but still very good
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 04/26/2005 11:58:24 PM
Focal point pulls me all over this shot, right & left.
Not sure what to suggest to better it though.
I like the way the text falls in the highlighted area.
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 04/26/2005 01:57:41 PM
I love the tag line and the composition. I'd ask for a little more DOF on the photo and the rule of putting a Company name in it is that it should be obvious who the company is. I don't get that here. I'd request that it were more pronounced. You could make it bigger and change the font. A small stroke would help.
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 04/25/2005 10:26:09 PM
Nice overall - possibly improved by not including the ends of the chain.....
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 04/25/2005 04:45:51 PM
If the right portion had been in better focus, I think this would be excellent!
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 04/25/2005 03:20:59 PM
This makes a nice advertisement. good job.
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 04/25/2005 12:31:06 AM
not sure if I think slogan helps or seems like one is just satisfied and not deserving? gl with challenge...shot is nice...tad much fade in lower right corner...
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