Good idea, but first, the picture really needs to be larger. Also, the strong light on the right side needed to be dealt with. Adding some contrast would really help too. The focus isn't good. I hope you keep trying (and I hope you have fun).
In a challenge where you can submit a 640 X 640 Pixel picture to a maximum of 150kb why not use the maximum amount available. 261px X 196px and 11Kb isnt enoughto do your subject justice.
Unless you have some compelling reason to use such a small image it's a good idea to take advantage of the full 640 pixels that DPC allows in at least one direction.
Good start. Thanks to enter this contest. If I can contribute to this picture... You had a distracting element made from a huge light at right portion of this image. Other issue is the poor contrast in all image. May be other hour the light provides more contrast.
How do I start with this...
First off, size - Most common tip on DPC: Make sure the image is close to the maximum size allowed (640px on the longest dimension).
Secondly, title states something obvious, but not specific to the challenge or helpful in relating the image to thte challenge (not that it needs to). A better title would simply be "V"
Thirdly, the bright light on the right detracts majorly from the picture.
Hang in there - I hope this feedback helps.
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