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04/10/2005 01:03:23 AM |
Originally posted by e301:
This is ... well, it really isn't very good at all, I'm afriad. The colours are washed out, considerably over-exposed. The organisation of the elements of the photograph is non-existent, there's such a visual confusion of so many subjects. You lighting, being from almost exactly the same direction as your point of view, hasn't even added any sense of depth and texture to those elements, making the image flat and uninteresting to the eye. The only saving grace is that the detail is good. |
The only in detail critique of your work, yet the only one you did not find helpful. What a shame. |
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04/04/2005 01:52:10 PM |
| Beginning of dinner... Good idea! I like the shot, colors look a bit faded to me. Good lighting. |
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04/04/2005 01:22:57 AM |
| I've never seen a kitchen look so neat -- I'm hungry now though. |
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04/03/2005 10:43:48 AM |
| LETS EAT Who cleaned up after the shoot? |
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04/02/2005 06:46:33 PM |
| This is ... well, it really isn't very good at all, I'm afriad. The colours are washed out, considerably over-exposed. The organisation of the elements of the photograph is non-existent, there's such a visual confusion of so many subjects. You lighting, being from almost exactly the same direction as your point of view, hasn't even added any sense of depth and texture to those elements, making the image flat and uninteresting to the eye. The only saving grace is that the detail is good. |
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04/02/2005 11:33:31 AM |
| Interesting picture, and definitely on target for the challenge. Good composition, but it's almost too busy to focus on any one thing. |
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03/31/2005 09:12:47 AM |
| Feels a bit lacking in contrast - a lighting issue? Colours might be more saturated (on my monitor). Tasty meal, though! Hope it was nice. |
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03/31/2005 01:35:37 AM |
| Too cluttered and the pork is out of focus. Your lighting is very good. |
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03/30/2005 06:04:27 PM |
| too much going on...no real order to the photo |
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03/30/2005 05:14:19 PM |
| Yum. Count me in. I'd have left out some of the background clutter and focused on the main meal ingredients. Minus the background, there is a good formula here for a dramatic still life. |
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03/30/2005 02:40:27 PM |
| Nice image, makes me hungrey. |
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03/30/2005 02:21:35 PM |
| those two have a big appetite |
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03/30/2005 01:00:05 PM |
| the colors need some punch |
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03/30/2005 11:56:08 AM |
| A little busy but it is all there. I guess the glass is filled with a different wine then the one in the bottle. Not much taken out of that one ;-) |
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