Coming from the "Want Comments" thread. Very nice BW conversion. My eye keeps going back to the hot spot on the ground, and I'm not sure if I think that's a good thing or not. Beautiful sky and strong sense of lines.
Nice work. Kinda makes me wonder where this person is going and who it is. Kind of mysterious. I think the composition works great here. If it was on level it wouldn't have as dramatic of a feel to it I believe. The border also helps. Maybe the only thing I would change is to try to get the whole sun in the image. Hope this helps and keep up the good work.