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There is strength in this image. However, your vanishing pont could for me happily have been placed higher in your frame - the point you've chosen feels quite weak compositionally; and the extreme contrast of the scene with that light isn't really helped by the use of colour, I think: there's no real depth to the tones that remain, and the movement from shadow to brighness is too quick, generally. That contrast lends itself so much more strongly to the use of black and white. This is also a heavily compressed image, resulting in that blockiness in the sky - you have three times as much data available to use as this, and it almost always hurts not to use it. It's an ideal scene for the challenge though, and the detailing and focus are good. |
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