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04/06/2003 04:20:29 PM |
Greets from the Critique Club!
Initial Impression:
Interesting idea, too much going on.
Challenge:
I really like the idea you had here, it's a very different interpretation of time than one would think of but still very reconizable. Good Job!
Compostion:
This is where you would lose the most points from me, I feel it's too jumbled and there's not enough focus on the action. Cropping either right below the cafe windows or right below the "Cafe Open" sign would have made this a better shot, in my opinion. It would allow the viewer to really get a feel for the situation without any of the other distractions.
Technical:
Good. Lighting is good, focus is good. Nothing really to fault in this area.
Overall:
Good action shot that meets the challenge creatively. A tighter crop would create more balance and a more focused composition.
Good Job and keep up the improvement!
-Matt |
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03/30/2003 11:49:23 PM |
damn, this happend to me taking pictures one time 30 minute parking but I wanted 3 hours
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03/28/2003 01:35:20 AM |
| An ORIGINAL response ! Well done - 8 |
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03/27/2003 12:16:16 AM |
| A fun photo and title. My eyes drift toward the interesting windows, though, when I feel they should end up on the officer. Perhaps if he was in focus and with a tighter crop: but then the photo would be uninteresting. Hmmm.... |
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03/26/2003 12:38:00 PM |
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03/25/2003 02:41:07 PM |
| good print quality and nice idea |
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03/24/2003 11:04:17 PM |
| that's funny, great timing, unless that's your truck! |
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03/24/2003 07:24:13 PM |
| You got this shot just in the nick of time. Bet he didn't know he was about to be entered into a contest. |
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03/24/2003 12:25:54 PM |
| Very good spontanuity(Sp.?) |
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03/24/2003 12:20:07 PM |
| Where is this taken? Wonderfully geeky vehicles the traffic police get to drive there, wherever it is... :) |
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03/24/2003 10:25:39 AM |
| But good news, the Cafe's still open :-) |
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03/24/2003 04:50:13 AM |
| Most sad, but humorous. Good take. |
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03/24/2003 12:34:34 AM |
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