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Challenge: From Above (Classic Editing)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S602Z
Location: Sydney, Australia
Date: Mar 16, 2003
Aperture: F 2.8
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/50 second
Galleries: Snapshot, Nude
Date Uploaded: Mar 16, 2003

She's just a natural poser! I have slightly changed the levels of this shot to emphasise the lines and cropped it, but I didn't need to change it much!

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03/25/2003 11:48:07 PM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

COMPOSITION
You have done well at cropping this so that the subject fills the frame diagonally. I think it works well that the eyes start in the lower left and go up and right. Then, on the right side, they are brought back down following the water droplets.

TECHNIQUE
The skin tones look okay, but the bath tub and water have a pinkish cast to me, and that gives it an unnatural feeling. You have captured the falling water very well. The focus on her face seems a bit soft, though. Since that is naturally where the viewer is going to look, I think it probably should be very clear. As a result, it gives the feeling of being a touch off, focus-wise, even though the water clearly shows that is not the case. Some of the water is a bit blown out, but I don't know if that detracts from it, or adds to the feeling of "brightness" in this shot. Just out of curiousity, did you try this in black and white?

OVERALL EFFECT
This shot immediately makes the viewers (well, most of them)smile because they remember their fun times in the tub, or their childrens' fun times. It is definitely a shot that you will want to save.

Best to you in future challenges.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/23/2003 09:57:43 PM
Cute idea. The colors seem off.
03/23/2003 05:46:56 PM
great title
03/23/2003 04:30:22 PM
lol
03/22/2003 03:34:57 PM
you've captured a sweet smile at the right moment
03/20/2003 10:09:17 PM
That's cute. Lighting seems a bit bright, color looks fine.
03/19/2003 06:45:48 PM
Nice idea but a bit overexposed.
03/19/2003 01:22:04 AM
White balance is off. Cute kid however.
03/18/2003 09:16:55 PM
I like the golden colors of the baby and the pinkness of the tub along with the "crystals" of water.
03/18/2003 02:25:29 PM
Good job. Nice image.
03/17/2003 11:54:19 PM
Cute


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