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02/19/2005 09:21:42 AM |
| At first I thought the background elements were distracting, especially the mobile, but now that I look at it more, I think they work well in the composition in an abstract/geometric way. The colors in this shot work really well together (muted reds/yellows/greens). |
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02/19/2005 06:49:24 AM |
| Good clean, sharp photo however the background is a bit distracting. Especially that red thing above your head, posing in front of something more uniformed would have helped and or using a very shallow DOF. |
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02/17/2005 09:52:48 AM |
| A very good self portrait with great facial expressions and interesting angle. A distinct cultured feel that speaks of a great person. Is this not what a portrait should be all about? Bumping up. |
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02/16/2005 08:28:00 AM |
Composition: 5
Technical: 5
Appeal: 4, objects in the background keep pulling my eyes from the subject. maybe a little more shallow DOF would blur them out to reduce distraction
Challenge: 7
Overall Calculated Average Score: 5, I like the tilt so the shot doesn't feel as plain |
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02/15/2005 11:03:14 PM |
you just don't hear the word diffident enough in a day. though this is a fairly bold portrait for one who claims not to be ;)
i like it. i like the skew to it, and i really like the red thing above your head...adds a twist.
nice work.
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02/15/2005 07:03:37 PM |
| interesting take on the challenge ... like the angle |
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02/15/2005 12:26:58 PM |
| Excellent subject focus, but the wall color bothers me. Don't mean to insult your walls. Somehow it just pulls my eye away from you. 7 |
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02/15/2005 12:04:07 PM |
| the red object behind your works great - excellent framing. |
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02/15/2005 06:29:05 AM |
| The red...mobile(?) above the head is a little distracting, but it does add variance of color. |
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