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02/17/2005 10:17:24 PM |
| A very nice study because of the great facial expression. The dark background works great and the intensity could have been lifted higher by a shift in the gama adjustment. However, the composition is good and this alone deserves a bump. |
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02/17/2005 04:30:09 PM |
| Portrait layout would be my preference for this shot. Still a nice comp. |
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02/16/2005 09:42:50 PM |
i don't know anything about portraiture, so i'm using your image as a guinnea pig as to what i think i would or wouldn't do in this situation, as well as what i notice and get out of your image.
my initial reaction is it is a bit too centered. i like the lighting, the expression, the pose. i especially like the range of colors across your face--very nice work. it just feels that there is a bit too much space behind your head (maybe take a look at a 1.25:1 crop from the left?). all the same, great work, and good luck! |
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02/15/2005 07:57:07 PM |
| nice entry... try moving subject 15 % to the right to off center |
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02/15/2005 01:49:17 PM |
| Your smile give me a sense of self-doubt... however taking your own portrait makes us all feel that way. Nice photo. |
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02/15/2005 11:26:00 AM |
| I would have liked the blacks to stay the same but your face be brighter. 7 |
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02/14/2005 04:56:29 AM |
| Nice portrait. Maybe I would have ligtened it just a bit and cropped square? 8 |
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