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I'm sorry, but the running mascara isn't natural. Way too staged to make an impact.
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Sorry but that's too unreal for me. Nothing like she's been crying, just.. painted some lines on her face with an eyeliner. The expression and lighting gets a three thouhg...
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The lighting and exposure are perfect. The veil is a pretty touch. Does anybody else find the black drawing on the face distracting? Or that little bump on the upper lip?
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im sorry but the drawn mascare id very distracting
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Interesting idea. But "drawn in" tear tracks weakens the effect greatly. Try again.
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Great contrast, clarity, and expression... but it really looks like you drew one her cheeks with eyeliner...
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Nice lighting and focus. I think there is a little too much mascara running. I'm wondering if the angle is a little too low also.
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The streaks seem very unnatural. Otherwise, great idea!
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Reminds me of the opening act of Kill BIll. it's getting to me. 7
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Great idea, but the mascara streams look too fake. 7
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