Something odd with the colour balance here, the lips look good but the pink smudge looks like it's on the print rather than the model (if you know what I mean) Nice framing.
Ah...The image with just the pale pink in the lips would have sufficed to give this image a high visual edge. The petal or pink in the cheek reduces the otherwise subtle impact. Lovely eyes. 6 on my first pass.
The destat works well here...May be just a dab like of pink on the cheek would work here (the smear is very strong and forces the viewer to that area) but viewers here at dpc might not put the two together (title and dab of pink). I think you could have got away with just the subtle pink lipstick and have a very good pic. The expression of the model and her eye's tell a story of their own. I might have done the crop with less negative space on the right and just a tad bit more below the lips. Technical a good shot.