Well done. I think the trick to an image like this is to have it simple enough to command attention, but complex enough to maintain interest. The white pillar keeps this from being simply a corner shot. It interrupts the vertical symmetry. The added detail on the bottom (a door perhaps?) has a circle in it, which connects it to the circles in the ceiling. Finally, everything is unified by being splashed with squares of light, but the squares themselves are extremely varied, providing interest.
Obviously, when you snap a picture, you don't realize all these things, which is why we talk about having a "feel" for it. Firstly, you trust your instincts to tell you when a shot will be good. Secondly, you develop those instincts by practicing your own photography and studying the photography of others. I apologize for this second paragraph and fully admit that the only reason I'm being so pedantic is because you're 14. But I wouldn't do it if I didn't think you had great potential. Rock on... |