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Just a walk in the Park
Just a walk in the Park
Musicman


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Challenge: Bridges (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: San Antonio, Texas - Elmendolf Park
Date: Mar 8, 2003
Aperture: F4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Date Uploaded: Mar 9, 2003

This bridge goes from street side of park to an island in the middle of the park.

Statistics
Place: 149 out of 229
Avg (all users): 5.1692
Avg (commenters): 6.2500
Avg (participants): 4.9925
Avg (non-participants): 5.5147
Views since voting: 1011
Votes: 201
Comments: 14
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03/21/2003 07:07:29 PM
Just a walk in the Park
Hi Musicman.
Critique by Silver Fox.


Composition is fine and a good photograph for the Bridges Challenge.

Visual interest is pretty good, and you have good focus. I especially like the reflections in the water of the bridge and trees.

Your photograph shows a nice wide angle of the bridge and scenery but you should have backed up a bit and included the other side of the bridge/or cropped a little less on the right hand side to include the right abutment.

The colour of your photograph is good for this time of year as there is not much color available on the trees or bushes yet, unless you want to do something with it on the computer. This would be a beautiful photograph to take in the fall.

Not a bad score or placement for your first Challenge Entry.

Keep up the good work, get out and keep shooting, look forward to seeing more of your shots in the coming weeks.

Regards,
Ed
 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/16/2003 12:41:07 AM
Pretty scene, beautiful reflection in the lake. I don't really see anything to complain about here - very nice.
03/15/2003 01:35:42 AM
It is difficult to see the bridge here. Different lighting or a dif. perspective may help.
03/13/2003 01:14:54 AM
Simple, pleasing composition: love the reflections.
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03/12/2003 06:38:21 PM
Really nice, like the reflections in the water of the bridge and trees, did you crop off the bridge to the right on purpose?
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03/12/2003 03:58:29 PM
sweet!
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03/12/2003 08:08:15 AM
I don't think that this is a well-composed shot. I think it would look better if you cropped some of the bottom of the photograph.
03/12/2003 01:03:00 AM
Really elegant image, potrays the scene and effectively communicates the bridge theme. Well done!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/11/2003 05:35:34 PM
Great reflection!
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03/11/2003 09:50:42 AM
good job. this is a nice image. it looks great
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03/10/2003 07:54:55 PM
Nice wide angle! Great trees and color. The picture is a little soft, however. I would have cropped a little less on top and a little more on the bottom. !
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03/10/2003 05:47:00 PM
maybe could have benefitted from a change in colour tone... channel mixer? greyscale? and the right side of the bridge is cut off...
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03/10/2003 02:20:43 PM
needs morel ight
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03/10/2003 11:40:22 AM
This should be on a calendar
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