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01/23/2005 07:37:22 PM |
Kathryn
This is a nice shot, technically. Nice detail and sharpness. The problem is the cut-off star. Both stars have nice, distinctive lines. The human eye follows a line in a composition (leading lines). You don't want a line that leads the eye out of the image, and that's happening at the bottom - those specular lines take the viewer out of the picture.
If you have a chance sometime, recompose the shot so there are no lines htiing the edge of the frame.
Just my thoughts.
Jerry |
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01/16/2005 11:05:00 PM |
| This is a well taken shot that meets the challenge. Just no wow for me. |
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01/15/2005 02:26:34 PM |
| overall this is a nice image that meets the challenge well. you could have done without the lights in the top right--they are more of a distraction than an enhancement to your image. good job! |
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01/13/2005 08:40:30 AM |
| Technically you have sucessfully produced a decent bokeh effect. Your subject matter however is a very difficult one to capture well especially when your background is so simalarly toned. For example if your BG was darker like the upper left of the frame, there would be more contrast and your subject would stand out more. Then if you had just a few points of light in the background you would add interest, instead of distracting from the subject. Hope this was helpful. Goodluck. |
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01/11/2005 11:00:26 PM |
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