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01/31/2005 04:49:13 AM |
| Great model but poor background with bin and doors. |
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01/25/2005 12:39:54 PM |
| nice pose, but a shame the background could not be so light. |
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01/24/2005 05:26:04 PM |
Just from her eye and her hair, you can tell right off the bat that you have a beautiful model to work with...but in my opinion you didn't take full advantage of that. The background is distracting and there are a lot of annoying hot spots. The light on her is nice, but the background doesn't fit the photo.
If I were you I'd get this girl back for some more photos in a nice, flattering environment and see what you can do. |
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01/23/2005 02:56:13 PM |
| Arg. I wish a little more of her face was visible. Nice idea. Also if you had gone with a larger aperature you could have faded out some of that slightly distractive background. |
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01/23/2005 02:22:45 PM |
| the background is burned out. |
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01/23/2005 11:58:57 AM |
| nice portrait. love the expression. i hope you're getting some good comments and suggestions, and not getting lost in the shuffle of this huge challenge. i might suggest that you blur out the background a bit more, as it is busy enough to distract from your otherwise interesting subject. good luck in this and the coming challenges! |
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01/23/2005 11:05:30 AM |
| Sexy! Personal taste: Wish the background were blurred out completely. As is it takes away from the model. Still a ver nice pose and shot. BOL |
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01/23/2005 02:04:46 AM |
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01/21/2005 08:42:27 PM |
| interesting idea, though to be honest Im not completly sold on having that much of her face covered in hair. Additionally the background is a little too blown out. I'd try a closer crop around the head to minimise the effect of that. |
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01/21/2005 01:00:12 PM |
| Too bad we don't see her face. |
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01/20/2005 11:47:37 AM |
| I like that through the hair i can see a glimpse of a smile. This picture has a "mona lisa" feel! |
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01/20/2005 06:50:05 AM |
| I like the contrast between your model and the backround. It takes you right to her face |
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01/19/2005 09:32:28 PM |
| For me, only seeing one eye really detracts from what could be a lovely portrait. |
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01/18/2005 11:30:31 AM |
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01/16/2005 03:45:14 PM |
| The lighting on her face (what I can see of it) seems alright but the background is too blown out. I don't like that her hair is hiding most of her face. Hair in front of the face can be used well but I think there's just too much in front on this one. |
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01/16/2005 01:39:56 PM |
| Lovely portrait, pity about the distracting background. Some work in PS could possibly improve. |
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01/16/2005 04:25:35 AM |
| You have a good looking model here, the only thing that ruins the photo is the background ===> the trash bin, the mall's doors, they just don't enhance this portrait. I would have looked for a more appealing background, or cropped in tight to eliminate the distracting background. Always pay attention to your background because its an important part of a portrait, I hope this helps... |
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01/16/2005 02:50:58 AM |
| Background's blown out, composition is very static. Cropping more tightly would have helped a lot. |
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