| Author | Thread |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
01/31/2005 12:40:56 PM |
| What a precious moment caught. Any parent would beam having this on their wall.Only suggestion I have is to clone out the blue toy in the lower right corner. ((7)) |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/26/2005 11:02:13 AM |
| Aww! Cute face. Overall, the image is pretty dark and has a bit of a green color cast to it. I'll usually try to get the skintones in a shot to balance out with how my subject actually looks. The other place to look for color balancing is a birght primary color. In this case the yellow bucket. See the green tint? An adorable moment though. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/22/2005 10:00:46 PM |
| looks like somebody's having a bit too much fun! while these images typically don't score well with the mainstream viewers, don't take that to heart. no score on dpc should ever minimize what you are able to do for your family with your camera. good luck, and keep shooting! |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/22/2005 10:59:45 AM |
I'm going to try this again. I went through and typed this all out once and when I cast my vote, it must have timed out and I lost everything. I think this photo has potential, even though, in all honesty, it is technically poorly done.
You captured a great expression on this childs face, showing the true innocence of a child.
Here are some of my suggestion on making this a better photo:
- While there are some blownout highlights on the jacket, the image overall looks a tad underexposed.
- The white balance is off, as there is a blue/green tint. You can fix this, for the most art in Photoshop, but setting it in camera is best.
- Don't oversharpen. There are bad "jaggies" around almost all the edges, really noticable on her chin and the pail.
- Using a shallower DOF would blur the background and help seperate the subject from it.
- Move some of the clutter out of the background before taking the shot. The way it is, it looks like she has toys growing from her head and back. :)
- Clone out the toy in the bottom right of the photo
If you would like to see a re-edit to see how some of these suggestions would improve this photo, feel free to PM me. You don't need to wait for the end of the challenge, since I have already voted on you photo. I hope my critique helps you. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/21/2005 04:47:09 PM |
| She is so adorable! This picture would make any parent proud. IT looks like it was taken in a studio. :) |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/21/2005 01:19:23 PM |
| Lovely little girl but I feel this is just a little snapshotty, the white balance is all wrong, too blueish and very unflattering.. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/20/2005 08:04:06 PM |
| You captured a beautiful moment. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/19/2005 09:03:18 PM |
| The lighting here is odd and the focus seems soft. Cute capture though. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/19/2005 06:41:25 PM |
| Photos of children are hard to score, the photo mean much to the person who took it but to others it may look like just another photo of a kid. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/19/2005 04:38:52 PM |
| This photo appears to have a cyan color cast. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/18/2005 12:39:44 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/16/2005 08:53:49 PM |
| Cute little girl. Focus appears soft...I would have brightened and tweaked the colours. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/16/2005 03:18:12 AM |
| This girl looks like a real character. Great facial expression. The focus is a little soft though. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Prints! -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2024 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/25/2024 09:32:28 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
