I'm not big on having one eye in focus and the other not. Unless you're going for some kind of unsettling effect, but that doesn't seem to be the idea here to me.
The focus detracts from my enjoying this photo. Having one half of the face in focus and the other out of focus ruins this shot for me sorry. Keep trying, look forward to further entries.
You have got to just love this photo. Would it be nice if both eyes were in focus? Yeah, but who cares, this is a wonderful capture of a moment in time.