The lighting here is pretty flat and the image looks a bit underexposed. While this literally may be your resolution, this image probably won't score highly because it doesn't really capture the imagination or make someone go "wow".
First off, it appears that you nailed the focus on this one. The disorganized busy appearance in this composition is fitting given your message. Couple of observations: it appears to be underexposed a hair or two. White balance is skewed to the warm side. Overall, a credible entry but one that just does not have broad appeal from an artistic viewpoint.
Very busy shot, clearly gets the message across of being unorganized. I'd toy around with the white balance on your camera or at least try to correct the color cast in Photoshop.
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