I really liked this a lot, at first, but a small, nit-picky thing, kept bothering me. I wish you would have straightened this along the roof edge. A perspective correction would have made it a little too perfect and would have taken away some of the charm. But the roof edge going up, such a small amount, comes across as more of a mistake than an intentional choice. Straightened it along the top or the edge of the roof would still have the vertical bars a bit wonky, but would be easier on the eye. 9 for the find. 8 for the processing.
(feel free to disagree. It's when I find something that I like a lot, I try to figure out what I like and what I don't. It's so much easier to critique someone else's work. :) But that helps me be more critical of my own.) |