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08/04/2025 01:39:24 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
My thoughts on the image: I really like the moody feel of the image you submitted, but it seems like the voters didn't find this flora dead enough. I like parts of the composition and the way the plant draws my eye into the image.
My ideas for improvement: Two things. I think I would have opened the frame up a little more for even better composition, and I feel like these would have needed to appear 'deader' to really fit in with the entries in this competition. The tight framing on the right makes the image feel constrained and uncomfortable. The eye is able to go into the image, but hits a wall on the left and stops.
Where I would have/did score this entry: I did not vote in the challenge, but I would have probable been a 4 or a 5. Nice color and the start of a good composition, but not enough death to meet the spirit of the challenge. Even still, thanks for sharing!
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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10/25/2024 10:49:03 AM |
| The purple color is lovely but I am not digging’ the fabric with the fuzzy dust on it |
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