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12/26/2004 12:11:46 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club,
This was a good subject for this challenge but it lacks any real focal point, which leaves the viewer thinking that it just a pile of junk. If you could have displayed it in such a way that the rebel body and logo was more prominent I think you would have had a much stronger image.
The image is nice and sharp with very good lighting and exposure but it̢۪s far to busy which is the real problem and is probably what held it back in the scoring.
The visual image of a camera in pieces would certainly evoke emotions amongst fellow photographers so you did well in your selection but it just needed better composition.
Good luck in future challenges
Regards
Tim Sturt
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12/19/2004 07:57:59 PM |
| Talk about broken. Good job on finding a great subject. |
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12/19/2004 06:21:24 AM |
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12/17/2004 08:21:20 PM |
| That is very painful to look at but one of my highest rated photos for this challenge. |
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12/16/2004 11:04:51 PM |
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12/16/2004 10:13:36 AM |
| nice detail in this rebelliousstill...Good Luck |
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12/14/2004 06:21:01 PM |
| OH NO !!!!! hope that wasn't your camera |
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12/14/2004 12:07:19 PM |
WHAT DID YOU DO???
You could have sent it me... good shot, nice focus and composition. |
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12/14/2004 03:14:35 AM |
Composition: 5, too busy
Technical: 6
Appeal: 5
Challenge: 5, Looks like "Pile of Parts" instead of "Broken"
Overall Calculated Average Score: 5, hope you got it put back together! ;-) |
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12/13/2004 11:26:50 PM |
You didn't need to take rebel apart to get yourself a ribbon...
Composition: Something is bothering me about it, probably a lack of focal point. The circles (from the EF mount?) could have been used to accentuate a recognizeable object in this mess, for example, the 'digital rebel' logo on the front of the case. Just a suggestion.
Challenge: The image meets and exceeds the assigned topic.
Overall, 8. |
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12/13/2004 09:55:25 PM |
| OH MY GOD! I saw that picture and instantly thought of it being my Rebel and the thought totally freaked me out. Good job...you earned a ten from me!!! |
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12/13/2004 07:08:48 PM |
| It's rather cluttered, with little sense of composition, apart from the two circles. I realise that's probably what you were going for, but it doesn't do much for me, I'm afraid - sorry! |
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12/13/2004 09:53:32 AM |
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12/13/2004 08:46:31 AM |
hehe a photographers nightmare..
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12/13/2004 01:14:43 AM |
OUCH!
Tell me you can put this back together again? :)
All the parts from this crop looks undamaged. However, I think this fits perfectly with the spirit of the challenge. Well done!
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12/13/2004 12:45:37 AM |
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