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MoeHair
MoeHair
Wildpurple


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Challenge: Hair III (Standard Editing)
Camera: Olympus OM-D E-M10 Mark II
Lens: Olympus 14-150mm f/4.0-5.6 M.Zuiko Digital ED
Location: Montville, NJ
Date: Apr 9, 2023
Aperture: 10.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/500
Date Uploaded: Mar 29, 2023

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Statistics
Place: 15 out of 19
Avg (all users): 5.3448
Avg (participants): 5.2000
Avg (non-participants): 5.4211
Views since voting: 100
Views during voting: 60
Votes: 29
Comments: 1
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/16/2023 12:10:27 PM
I have a strong suspicion whose entry this is and I know you have requested feedback, so here are a handful of things I noticed:
-The image is pretty flat looking. Not a lot of variations in tonal range. A levels adjustment would take care of a lot of that, giving the image more detail and visual pop.
-What look like creases in the background image are pulling my eye away from the adorable doggo.
-That pink background may have also affected the auto white balance for the main subject, which isn't terrible, but looks a little off. A fix for that going forward could be to shoot in RAW. It requires more work in post processing, but offers a lot of control over both white balance and to pull in detail from clipped highlights and shadows that would be lost in a JPG.
-The crop is a little tight, especially at the bottom. It leads my eye through the image in an odd way. Perhaps having a bit more room at the bottom under the dog's chin would help that.

Sorry to be so harsh, but if this is from whom I think, I know you wanted feedback.
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