Critique Club
Composition-Content
Your idea is great, very original approach to yellow. I like the composition that you have used, an interesting perspective. The yellow letters really stand out against the background and in comparison to the other colours.
Technical
Your lighting is fantastic, the yellw letters have a great glow to them and interesting shadows, while the others letters are not emphasised, therefore drawing the viewers attention to ASK.
Focus seems to be quite soft overall, I wonder if you used a tripod, with such a slow shutter speed I think that a tripod is vital. However the overall softness does add to the abstractness of the shot. DOF is fantastic, but with that aperture focus on the main subject would be pretty hard to achieve, perhaps a smaller aperture would have helped the focus.
My Opinion
Great shot, very original and great lighting. Good Luck in the next challenge. |
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