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12/14/2004 08:53:32 PM |
| too out of focus and busy |
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12/14/2004 08:53:24 PM |
| Nice idea, you must have kids I'm thinking. Only things I would like to point out is that it̢۪s a little out of focus to my eyes and if only that yellow strap on the right hand side was removed. I think the strap actually takes away from the photo here, it's distracting. |
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12/14/2004 06:34:24 PM |
| Just slightly out of focus, and little busy compositionally. |
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12/12/2004 10:25:13 PM |
| My biggest problem with it is everything seems out of focus. |
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12/09/2004 06:40:45 AM |
In my humble opinion, I think there are quite a few places to improve this shot.
1.) It's soft/unsharp, you can see a thin layer of blur in the image. Try to hold the camera more steady, or use tripod/table/object to steady the camera more.
2.) Also try to sharpen the image using photoshop or paint shop pro, sharpen or USM will make it look much more sharp and detailed.
3.) I can see a lot of the background but the objects are cut. Try to find a different angel that will bring forward the subjects you're trying to photography.
4.) Add more saturation and contrast will make it more inviting and exciting.
Hope this helps! Giving you a 5 for the try, good luck. |
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12/09/2004 01:01:33 AM |
| Ups. Poor focus. Composition too busy. The back ground does not help at all. Sorry! 3 |
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12/08/2004 08:40:43 PM |
| This is too scattered for me. I would like a direction or a focal point. Image could be crisper. Make the obscured toy your focal point, or the yellow giraffe since this the yellow challenge, maybe, and the other toys around it, drawing attention to it, or away from it... The yellow cloth strap is distracting. Give me as your view a way to go with this. |
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12/08/2004 12:14:30 AM |
| This seems to be a bit out of focus and there's really nothing leading my directly towards the yellow. |
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