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03/01/2003 11:47:26 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club };-)
Initial thoughts
Vibrant yellow, meets the challenge
Composition/ Content
I love the colors of the shot, the yellow is awesome. I feel as if it may have been cropped just a little too close. I would like to see more room above the Trumpet keys and maybe just a touch more of the trumpet.
Background
I can't tell what the blue and yellow object are in the background but they do distract slightly from the focal point.
Camera Work - Technical
Focus seems good and contrast is excellent. I like the lighting as it adds to the curves and such of the trumpet and of course lit up the yellow color perfectly.
Digital Processing - Technical
Seems good, nice and sharp. A dark border may have made it stand out even more.
Fits The Challenge
Definitely fits the challenge well.
My Opinion On The Photo
I originally scored this shot a six, bordering on a seven which was slightly better than your average score. It is one of your highest scores and deservedly so. I think that it meets the challenge well and caught the voters eye with that great color. Good job, and keep up the good work.
I would be happy to talk further about this shot if you would like to contact me.
DougPaz
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02/22/2003 10:24:52 PM |
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02/22/2003 09:13:50 PM |
| ....and it's oh sooooo cool! Beautiful! |
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02/22/2003 02:10:50 AM |
| nice a sharp and good dof.. might help to have a widen crop and some contrast or decreased brightness though |
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02/21/2003 01:06:30 PM |
| nice,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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02/18/2003 09:45:53 PM |
| Excellent color. Very nice detail and focus. I really like the lines and shadows that were captured in this shot. My guess is that it was captured through a shot window or through a display case.(?) Just looks as though there is a little glare toward the bottom of the image. Nicely done. |
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02/18/2003 12:59:16 AM |
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02/18/2003 12:41:07 AM |
| nice image, i like the color and the clearity in it, good job |
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02/17/2003 10:48:56 PM |
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02/17/2003 02:52:49 AM |
| a yellow trumpet? was your lense dirty? look blurry in certain areas. |
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02/17/2003 01:31:45 AM |
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