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02/26/2003 11:05:09 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Meets the challenge. I think you chose a difficult subject with this vase due to the lines in it. I think that the distortion of some of the lines throws things a little out of whack. If it were a little more uniform distortion (write that one down) then I think it would've been more accepted by the voters (myself included). The concept is one I've seen many times, but I think you are the first one to do a patterned vase. Most of them I've seen are done with champagne glasses or something with minimal curves. Another flaw I see with this is the highlights on your dropcloth. I think the backdrop should've run on one level across the bottom. The flash of light on the left side could've been eliminated too.
Technical - The exposure looks excellent. Good colors and a nice sharp pic. Very nicely done.
Overall - A solid shot with a couple minor things that could be fixed to make it a real contender. I think you've gotten the concept right and just need a little refining on the setup end with the light and the drop cloth to take this to the next level. A well taken photo no doubt, but I am pretty sure that losing the light and fixing the background would've done a world of good. Nice pic and good luck in the future - Bob |
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02/23/2003 10:44:54 PM |
| I like the lines in this photo. |
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02/23/2003 09:41:32 PM |
| It's hard not to think of the winner of the Blue challenge with this image, but hey, if you find something that works, use it! |
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02/22/2003 10:53:47 PM |
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02/22/2003 06:37:44 PM |
| the only thing that gets me about this is the rippled edge of the cloth next to the yellow background. It leaves me wishing for a straighter edge there. BUT! This is quality work overall.. really like the patterns, and the black against the yellow. lighting is done very well too. |
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02/22/2003 06:18:57 AM |
| I like this effect a lot, and you've made it into your own here. I like the patterns on the vase, and the point to which the water is filled up is perfect. |
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02/21/2003 09:17:25 PM |
| Great color, abstract, and composition! |
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02/21/2003 04:31:32 PM |
| This photo is good, but could be INCREDIBLE if the black line beneath the yellow on the left was straight. Technically a nice shot - 8 |
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02/21/2003 03:16:50 AM |
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02/20/2003 08:13:13 PM |
| Cool photo, got a direct 7 from me. That yellow is so pastel! The transformation from yellow to black is clean and sharp. The refraction effect is perfect! Good job, you owe me one :-))))) |
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02/19/2003 03:16:07 PM |
| Very nice shot. Same idea as TWO TONE TONIC which was in the BLUE challenge. I like that you can see the area which the vase is resting on. The black cloth used for the base is very nice and adds to the image IMO. I also really like the lines in the vase that cross over one another. Really adds and draws my eye to the center of the photo. |
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02/19/2003 01:08:16 AM |
| This would have been a 10 but that cloth at the bottom makes the photo look terrible. keep shooting. |
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02/18/2003 11:01:59 AM |
| Nice image. Very well planned and organized. I like the use of lines and patterns in the image that help to create a nice touch. Good job. |
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02/17/2003 11:16:47 PM |
| The only thing I would like to see improved is the bit of cloth on the left side that's bunched up, would be nice if it was just solid black. |
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02/17/2003 11:04:16 PM |
| Similar technique used previously, nice though! |
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02/17/2003 04:53:18 PM |
| That black cloth at the bottom detracts from an otherwise excellent photo. |
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02/17/2003 02:46:49 PM |
| nicely done, the only thing that I would suggest would have been to crop the bottom of the shot off, or taken a closer framed shot. Personally the cloth on the bottom is a little distracting, but its not a big deal just something that hit me because i'm obsessive compulsive. Otherwise this is an incredible shot. |
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02/17/2003 01:10:08 PM |
| well, nice but something is wrong...dont you worry..got a good score in technical aspect. |
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02/17/2003 12:47:52 PM |
| Beautiful and so very well done. Unique spit photo !!! Perfect lighting and contrast. |
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02/17/2003 11:30:50 AM |
| this photo looks strangely familiar. :) the glare from the lighting against the wall is a little distracting, but not overly. |
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02/17/2003 08:51:20 AM |
| Really nice composition - I love the swapping effect. Only thing I would have done differently is balance the yellow on the top left with yellow on the bottom right - but maybe part of the appeal is the asmmetry? |
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02/17/2003 01:28:37 AM |
| Nice shot. There appears to be a strange blur on the left side of the vase, but I guess it's the thickness of the glass. I've got to try one of these shots - looks fun to shoot. |
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