| This is only my opinion. But you do have a good photo here. But for me, it is just a bunch of graves/tombs with no story. There is no drama, it is just, 'oh I am waling along, this might look good in BW' If there was more drama, this would take the eye. More contrast, more structure, more grain, dodge that Angel in the background, bring out the details of the marble, the cast iron. Have a story in our pictures, the most prominent grave is Ford, so make him moody, bring out the water stains and the age, make it look almost neglected. john Fest and Bow Fest are marble, so look cleaner, could they have been the better people with there whiter than white tombs, is the angel looking over them. Just playing with saturated colours, selective colours, brightness and neutral colours etc, could have made this whole thing pop,. But then again, I am a bit of a drama girl and love a story. So ignore me if I hae overstepped with this comment. |
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