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11/27/2004 03:21:30 PM |
I think you would have done a lot better by cropping in on the building there is just to much negative space and the fire station is to centered. Your idea here was good just needs a little refining.
Message edited by HBunch - Removed Critique Club status. |
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11/19/2004 12:25:48 PM |
| Just too murky, and the pickup trucks detract from the intended message, I think. Maybe a zoom on the 3 doors with trucks on-the-ready would have served better. |
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11/19/2004 12:55:30 AM |
I'm afraid that I find this shot poorly exposed, not framed very well, taken from too great a distance, and out of focus. In essence, a very mediocre snapshot.
Technical aspects aside, while firefighters *do* do heroic deeds everyday, this shot doesn't do a lot to invoke that heroism in my eyes. |
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11/15/2004 06:28:20 PM |
| Good idea, but could have been better exicuted. Frankly, your subject feels simply too broad. |
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11/15/2004 05:39:31 PM |
| I think the concept is good, but the compostion is a little boring. I think I might have tried a closer shot, maybe from an angle, to add some depth. It looks like you tried to keep the flag in the shot, but in this case, to do so creates a lot of negative blank space. One other thing, you probably should have used a tripod for this night shot as it's a little blurred. Good luck |
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