Greetings from the Critique Club!
An interesting pic, showing the fun intimacy of a family having fun on a very interesting piece of architecture. However, the left side of the pic is a nice sunset over a city, and it competes with the family/bridge...in fact, even your title draws attention more to the sunset than the family. Hence, they cancel each other out as the eye is continually roving between the two sides, and finding no rest in either. Hence the high number of low scores. Also, there is far too much post-processing work going on in the colour department. It doesn't look real, and anything here that looks fake (especially in Free Studies, where competition is already very tough and you are expected to enter your very best work from that month) will get voted down. I suggest focusing more on the composition and less on the post-processing!
Feel free to PM me with any comments or questions,
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