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10/13/2016 06:06:13 AM |
Hello from the critique club
An interesting image that meets the challenge well
I like your creative approach here, it shows originality. Unlike your commenter I think your ship is in focus in the right places but perhaps the DOF is just a tad on the shallow side, having said that the sail is nicely sharp against the soft focus background so it helps define the boat more effectively. I was thinking perhaps the exposure could be a 1/3 stop less to reduce the brightness of the highlights but this would affect your boat which is nice and bright, I would say you’ve got it right. Thanks for such an original entry Fabio, keep up the good work. |
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10/08/2016 07:38:39 AM |
Not voting because I can't see these colors correctly (color deficient)
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This is interesting I am not sure I remember how to do those oragami boats.
The sheet details is in focus but the boat is not and I would expect to see the boat be more in focus than the background to it. I love the creativity that this image brings and there is so much potential to it. |
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10/05/2016 12:46:10 AM |
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